Can someone let me know if my message hit the mark, or did I just come across as overly obsessed? I genuinely welcome any tough feedback—I’m a Capricorn with Leo rising, and I know I can bounce back quickly once I hear the truth. Frankly, the situation seems problematic on multiple levels, and I’m feeling quite unsure about my next steps. I debated where else to post, but I trust this community for honest opinions.
after reading your note, i felt it was well-intentioned and sincere. drawing upon my own expeirence in advocacy, I can say that your concern and urgency comes across genuinely. you might consider refining a few segments to bolster clarity, though the personal passion you express gives it an authentic appeal. sometimes a tad more specificity can help the reader understand your exact expectations, but overall your message conveys the essence of the issue and your commitment to it.
i think ur note came off as genuine and not too overblown. a slight tweak here and there might polish it up, but overall it’s real talk. keep it up, sometimes real passion gets the point across.
Hey SingingLion, I just read through your note and it honestly feels coming straight from the heart. I think you nailed the balance between passionate and respectful—your point comes across clearly without feeling too overboard. If anything, it shows how deeply you care about the issue, and that’s admirable. It might be worth having someone else read it over just to catch any spots that might be tweaked, but in general, your tone is genuine and relatable. Sometimes our genuine enthusiasm is exactly what makes the difference. Keep at it, and don’t be too hard on yourself – self-critique is great, but trust that your voice matters! Cheers 